Sunday, November 21, 2010
Alternate Ending
The walls kept coming closer and closer until I could not stand any longer. I begin to fall, but I happen to have time to grab onto the edge of the pit. I try to hold on for as long as I can, but I am so tired and I still feel drugged. I attempt to pull myself back up, but all of a sudden I starting feeling tickling and tiny pains all over my body. There are spiders crawling all over me! They itch and hurt so badly. I decide that dying from spider bites would be a lot more painful and torturous than falling down the pit. I let go and all of a sudden I am falling. My life flashes before my eyes, and the next thing I know I am in some water. I try swimming around, but I am just to tired. I do not think that I can avoid anymore attempts at torture so I just decide to drown myself. I take a big inhale of breath and pass out. Everything goes black, then suddenly I see a bright light and I realize I am dead.
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This is creepy! The spider part is gross, but it definitely adds to the story. The ending is very descriptive and very straight forward, which I think is good. Nice job!
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